[arin-ppml] Section 6.5.9 Community Network Allocations - Community Input for NRPM Working Group

[Matthew Wilder]

Hello community members,

Thank you to everyone who has provided inputs for the working group's
consideration with regard to Section 6 policies. There have been great
discussions that we as a working group (and Advisory Council more broadly)
are taking note of.

In the final Section 6 topic that the NRPM Working Group wishes to bring to
the community's attention, we will be looking at 6.5.9 Community Network
Allocations.

We wonder if it might be beneficial to strike the entire first paragraph,
which provides some context which is somewhat beyond the scope of policy
(for instance mentioning the budgets of community networks). The material
bits of policy do not appear to reside in that paragraph, and this
paragraph reads to us more like a problem statement rather than policy.


Additionally we would like to suggest the capitalization of all instances
of "Community Networks" in the entire section and its subsections to
properly reference the definition of this term found in section 2.


We very much appreciate your consideration and any feedback you have to
these suggestions as we measure what actions we might take to improve
Section 6.


Best regards,


Matthew Wilder
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