[arin-ppml] Revised/Retitled - Draft Policy ARIN-2021-1: ASN Clarifications to Sections 2 and 8

[Martin Hannigan]

Are the changes for 10.2 abandoned or will they come back to life in a
separate proposal?

Thanks!

-M< (asking for the ASO)



On Thu, May 20, 2021 at 9:57 PM A N <anita.nikolich at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Bill -
> I'm one of the AC Shepards on this one. This presentation on Day 2 of the
> ARIN 47 meetings lays it out with the changes highlighted (please ignore
> Section 10.3 as that has been taken out of the draft) but let us know if
> there are still questions. See mid way through Day 2 - you can click on the
> slide deck: https://www.arin.net/participate/meetings/ARIN47/
>
> Anita
>
>
> On Thu, May 20, 2021 at 4:20 PM William Herrin <bill at herrin.us> wrote:
>
>> On Thu, May 20, 2021 at 11:12 AM ARIN <info at arin.net> wrote:
>> > * ARIN-2021-1: ASN Clarifications to Sections 2 and 8
>>
>> Howdy,
>>
>> Would the proposal authors offer a couple examples where the changed
>> language clarifies the policy, explaining why the prior policy could
>> be interpreted to mean something different than the new one?
>>
>> I see you moved a lot of words around but they seem to me to be the
>> same words providing the same meanings to the same components of each
>> sentence.
>>
>>
>> For "purely editorial" policy changes there are two things I'd
>> personally like to see in the proposal:
>>
>> 1. A redline version of the impacted policy sections showing the
>> struck and replaced text so it can be readily understood in context.
>>
>> 2. A change-by-change explanation of what was wrong with the old
>> version that the new version fixes. Is it poor grammar? A possible
>> misinterpretation? Esthetically offensive? What specifically does the
>> change correct? If someone in the community expressed confusion about
>> what a sentence meant, what did they say and how does the new text
>> resolve that concern?
>>
>> Regards,
>> Bill Herrin
>>
>> --
>> William Herrin
>> bill at herrin.us
>> https://bill.herrin.us/
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