[arin-ppml] Revised/Retitled - Draft Policy ARIN-2021-1: ASN Clarifications to Sections 2 and 8

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Hi Bill -
I'm one of the AC Shepards on this one. This presentation on Day 2 of the
ARIN 47 meetings lays it out with the changes highlighted (please ignore
Section 10.3 as that has been taken out of the draft) but let us know if
there are still questions. See mid way through Day 2 - you can click on the
slide deck: https://www.arin.net/participate/meetings/ARIN47/

Anita


On Thu, May 20, 2021 at 4:20 PM William Herrin <bill at herrin.us> wrote:

> On Thu, May 20, 2021 at 11:12 AM ARIN <info at arin.net> wrote:
> > * ARIN-2021-1: ASN Clarifications to Sections 2 and 8
>
> Howdy,
>
> Would the proposal authors offer a couple examples where the changed
> language clarifies the policy, explaining why the prior policy could
> be interpreted to mean something different than the new one?
>
> I see you moved a lot of words around but they seem to me to be the
> same words providing the same meanings to the same components of each
> sentence.
>
>
> For "purely editorial" policy changes there are two things I'd
> personally like to see in the proposal:
>
> 1. A redline version of the impacted policy sections showing the
> struck and replaced text so it can be readily understood in context.
>
> 2. A change-by-change explanation of what was wrong with the old
> version that the new version fixes. Is it poor grammar? A possible
> misinterpretation? Esthetically offensive? What specifically does the
> change correct? If someone in the community expressed confusion about
> what a sentence meant, what did they say and how does the new text
> resolve that concern?
>
> Regards,
> Bill Herrin
>
> --
> William Herrin
> bill at herrin.us
> https://bill.herrin.us/
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