[arin-ppml] Revised/Retitled - Draft Policy ARIN-2021-1: ASN Clarifications to Sections 2 and 8

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The changes will *likely* come back to life in a different proposal. This
is still being discussed!

On Thu, May 20, 2021 at 9:00 PM Martin Hannigan <hannigan at gmail.com> wrote:

>
> Are the changes for 10.2 abandoned or will they come back to life in a
> separate proposal?
>
> Thanks!
>
> -M< (asking for the ASO)
>
>
>
> On Thu, May 20, 2021 at 9:57 PM A N <anita.nikolich at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi Bill -
>> I'm one of the AC Shepards on this one. This presentation on Day 2 of the
>> ARIN 47 meetings lays it out with the changes highlighted (please ignore
>> Section 10.3 as that has been taken out of the draft) but let us know if
>> there are still questions. See mid way through Day 2 - you can click on the
>> slide deck: https://www.arin.net/participate/meetings/ARIN47/
>>
>> Anita
>>
>>
>> On Thu, May 20, 2021 at 4:20 PM William Herrin <bill at herrin.us> wrote:
>>
>>> On Thu, May 20, 2021 at 11:12 AM ARIN <info at arin.net> wrote:
>>> > * ARIN-2021-1: ASN Clarifications to Sections 2 and 8
>>>
>>> Howdy,
>>>
>>> Would the proposal authors offer a couple examples where the changed
>>> language clarifies the policy, explaining why the prior policy could
>>> be interpreted to mean something different than the new one?
>>>
>>> I see you moved a lot of words around but they seem to me to be the
>>> same words providing the same meanings to the same components of each
>>> sentence.
>>>
>>>
>>> For "purely editorial" policy changes there are two things I'd
>>> personally like to see in the proposal:
>>>
>>> 1. A redline version of the impacted policy sections showing the
>>> struck and replaced text so it can be readily understood in context.
>>>
>>> 2. A change-by-change explanation of what was wrong with the old
>>> version that the new version fixes. Is it poor grammar? A possible
>>> misinterpretation? Esthetically offensive? What specifically does the
>>> change correct? If someone in the community expressed confusion about
>>> what a sentence meant, what did they say and how does the new text
>>> resolve that concern?
>>>
>>> Regards,
>>> Bill Herrin
>>>
>>> --
>>> William Herrin
>>> bill at herrin.us
>>> https://bill.herrin.us/
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