[arin-ppml] Version 1.1 (grammatical cleanup and clarification) of Proposal 158 (Clarify Multiple Discrete Networks IPv4 Policy)

[Matthew Petach]

On Thu, Nov 10, 2011 at 12:10 PM, Owen DeLong <owen at delong.com> wrote:
> Below is an update to Proposal 158. The changes are very minor (corrected some
> typos) and do not change the meaning or intent at all.
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> The resulting section 4.5 would read:
>
> 4.5. Multiple Discrete Networks
>
> Organizations with multiple discrete networks desiring to request new or additional address space under a single Organization ID must meet the following criteria:
>
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> 4.5.5 When applying for additional internet address registrations from ARIN, the organization must demonstrate utilization greater than 50% of both the last block allocated and the aggregate sum of all blocks allocated from ARIN to that organization. If an organization is unable to satisfy this 50% minimum utilization criteria, the organization may alternatively qualify for additional internet address registrations by having all unallocated blocks of addresses smaller than ARIN's current minimum allocation size.

I'm sorry, but "the organization may alternatively qualify for
additional internet
address registrations by having all unallocated blocks of addresses smaller
than ARIN's current minimum allocation size." seems to be a sentence fragment,
and doesn't parse into meaningful English.

Could that section be rewritten in a way that makes sense?  I have
no idea what it is trying to say.  :(

Thanks!

Matt