[arin-ppml] Draft policy 2022-11 Revising Section 2.17

[William Herrin]

On Thu, Mar 16, 2023 at 10:09 AM WOOD Alison * DAS
<Alison.WOOD at das.oregon.gov> wrote:
> “Internet number resources are unique identifiers within the Internet Numbers Registry System [as described in IETF RFC 7020] and this includes ranges (or “blocks”) of contiguous Internet Protocol (“IP”) addresses and Autonomous System Numbers (“ASNs”).”
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> I would love your feedback on this definition.

Howdy,

I think it remains garbage for the same reasons I expressed a month
and a half ago. Defining technical jargon in terms of other jargon is
unhelpful. The point of section 2 is to render technical jargon in
terms of -ordinary English-.

https://lists.arin.net/pipermail/arin-ppml/2023-January/070201.html
https://lists.arin.net/pipermail/arin-ppml/2023-January/070202.html

Regards,
Bill Herrin


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On Thu, Mar 16, 2023 at 10:09 AM WOOD Alison * DAS
<Alison.WOOD at das.oregon.gov> wrote:
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> Good morning PPML!
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> I am the shepherd for draft policy 2022-11, revising section 2.17.
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> This draft policy deals with the definition of Internet number resources, which is currently not defined in the NRPM.  Our proposed definition is as follows:
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> “Internet number resources are unique identifiers within the Internet Numbers Registry System [as described in IETF RFC 7020] and this includes ranges (or “blocks”) of contiguous Internet Protocol (“IP”) addresses and Autonomous System Numbers (“ASNs”).”
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> I would love your feedback on this definition.
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> Thank you!
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> -Alison Wood
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