[arin-ppml] Draft Policy ARIN-2022-5: Clean-up of NRPM Section 2.11

[Owen DeLong]

I believe these changes do not materially affect the meaning of the passage and therefore do support treatment of this as an editorial change.

Owen


> On Jul 26, 2022, at 14:35, ARIN <info at arin.net> wrote:
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> On 21 July 2022, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) accepted "ARIN-prop-312: Clean-up of NRPM Section 2.11" as a Draft Policy.
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> Draft Policy ARIN-2022-5 is below and can be found at:
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> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2022_5/ <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2022_5/>
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> You are encouraged to discuss all Draft Policies on PPML. The AC will evaluate the discussion to assess the conformance of this draft policy with ARIN's Principles of Internet number resource policy as stated in the Policy Development Process (PDP). Specifically, these principles are:
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> * Technically Sound
> * Supported by the Community
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> Regards,
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> Sean Hopkins
> Senior Policy Analyst
> American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)
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> Draft Policy ARIN-2022-5: Clean-up of NRPM Section 2.11  
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> Problem Statement:
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> This proposal continues the work that the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up Working Group undertook to conduct an editorial review of the NRPM. It relates specifically to Section 2.11. The focus of this proposal is to ensure that the intended meaning of the text is clear.
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> Policy statement:
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> Change the text “A community network is deployed, operated and governed by its users” to “A community network is one that is deployed, operated and governed by its users” in the first line and change the text “to the user community it services” to “to the community it services” in the second line.
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> Timetable for implementation: Immediate
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> Comments:
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> This proposal is intended to replace Prop-305 in part. Although the proposal was drafted in the course of an editorial review of Section 2.11, some of the changes proposed may not be considered purely editorial in nature and so this proposal is not being presented as strictly editorial.
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