[arin-ppml] Revised - Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8 Editorial Clean-up

[Alyssa Quinn]

I support this editorial change.

On Thu, Aug 19, 2021 at 10:49 AM Brian Jones <bjones at vt.edu> wrote:

> This editorial change makes the NRPM cleaner and easier to read and
> understand. I support this change.
>
>
> On Aug 18, 2021, at 4:59 PM, ARIN <info at arin.net> wrote:
>
> The following Editorial Change has been revised:
>
> * ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8 Editorial Clean-up
>
> Revised text is below and can be found at:
>
> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/
>
> The process for Editorial Changes is found in Part One, Section 3.1,
> paragraph 3 of the Policy Development Process (PDP):
>
> "Changes to policy that are purely editorial and non-substantial in nature
> are outside the scope of the full Policy Development Process and may only
> be made with 30 days public notice followed by the concurrence of both the
> ARIN Advisory Council and ARIN Board of Trustees that the changes are
> non-substantial in nature."
>
> Your feedback on this Editorial Change is encouraged as the community
> review period continues. This review period will close on 26 August 2021.
>
> The PDP can be found at:
>
> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/
>
> Draft Policies and Proposals under discussion can be found at:
>
> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/
>
> Regards,
>
> Sean Hopkins
> Senior Policy Analyst
> American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)
>
>
>
> Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8 Editorial Clean-up
>
> Problem Statement:
>
> ARIN staff have identified some areas of potential NRPM editorial
> clean-up. Building on those recommendations the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up
> Working Group undertook an editorial review of the NRPM.
>
> The focus of the review was to clarify and simplify language, employ
> consistent and more up to date terminology throughout and renumber the
> sections after removing section numbers that were no longer being utilized.
> The changes resulting from this review were captured in ARIN-edit-2020-9,
> proposed in September 2020.
>
> The portions of ARIN-edit-2020-9 relating to Sections 8.3 and 8.4 of the
> NRPM are presented in this editorial change for community consideration.
> The remaining portions will be presented separately.
>
> Policy Statement:
>
> In Section 8.3.:
>
> Under "Conditions on source of the transfer," replace "The source entity
> must not have received a transfer, allocation, or assignment of IPv4 number
> resources from ARIN for the 12 months prior to the approval of a transfer
> request. Number resources received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out
> of scope for the purposes of this restriction." with "Excluding section 8.2
> transfers, the source entity must not have received a transfer, allocation,
> or assignment of IPv4 number resources from ARIN during the 12 months prior
> to the approval of a transfer request."
>
> In Section 8.4.:
>
> Under "Conditions on source of the transfer," replace "Number resources
> received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for the purposes
> of this restriction" with "This restriction does not include 8.2
> transfers."
>
> Timetable for Implementation: Immediate
>
>
>
>
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