<div dir="ltr">I support this editorial change. </div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Thu, Aug 19, 2021 at 10:49 AM Brian Jones <<a href="mailto:bjones@vt.edu">bjones@vt.edu</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;">This editorial change makes the NRPM cleaner and easier to read and understand. I support this change.<div><br><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>On Aug 18, 2021, at 4:59 PM, ARIN <<a href="mailto:info@arin.net" target="_blank">info@arin.net</a>> wrote:</div><br><div><div style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span>The following Editorial Change has been revised:<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>* ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8 Editorial Clean-up<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>Revised text is below and can be found at:<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span><a href="https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/" style="color:rgb(5,99,193);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,100)">https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/</span></a><u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>The process for Editorial Changes is found in Part One, Section 3.1, paragraph 3 of the Policy Development Process (PDP):<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>"Changes to policy that are purely editorial and non-substantial in nature are outside the scope of the full Policy Development Process and may only be made with 30 days public notice followed by the concurrence of both the ARIN Advisory Council and ARIN Board of Trustees that the changes are non-substantial in nature."<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>Your feedback on this Editorial Change is encouraged as the community review period continues. This review period will close on 26 August 2021.<span> </span><u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>The PDP can be found at:<span> </span><u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span><a href="https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/" style="color:rgb(5,99,193);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,100)">https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/</span></a><u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>Draft Policies and Proposals under discussion can be found at:<span> </span><u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span><a href="https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/" style="color:rgb(5,99,193);text-decoration:underline" target="_blank"><span style="color:rgb(0,0,100)">https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/</span></a><u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>Regards,<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>Sean Hopkins<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>Senior Policy Analyst<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8 Editorial Clean-up<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>Problem Statement:<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>ARIN staff have identified some areas of potential NRPM editorial clean-up. Building on those recommendations the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up Working Group undertook an editorial review of the NRPM.<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>The focus of the review was to clarify and simplify language, employ consistent and more up to date terminology throughout and renumber the sections after removing section numbers that were no longer being utilized. The changes resulting from this review were captured in ARIN-edit-2020-9, proposed in September 2020.<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>The portions of ARIN-edit-2020-9 relating to Sections 8.3 and 8.4 of the NRPM are presented in this editorial change for community consideration. The remaining portions will be presented separately.<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>Policy Statement:<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span>In Section 8.3.:<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span><u></u> <u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span>Under "Conditions on source of the transfer," replace "The source entity must not have received a transfer, allocation, or assignment of IPv4 number resources from ARIN for the 12 months prior to the approval of a transfer request. Number resources received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for the purposes of this restriction." with "Excluding section 8.2 transfers, the source entity must not have received a transfer, allocation, or assignment of IPv4 number resources from ARIN during the 12 months prior to the approval of a transfer request."<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span><u></u> <u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span>In Section 8.4.:<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span><u></u> <u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span>Under "Conditions on source of the transfer," replace "Number resources received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for the purposes of this restriction" with "This restriction does not include 8.2 transfers." <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span><u></u> <u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span>Timetable for Implementation: Immediate<u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px"><span> <u></u><u></u></span></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><u></u> <u></u></div><div style="margin:0in;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><u></u> <u></u></div></div><span style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline">_______________________________________________</span><br style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><span style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline">ARIN-PPML</span><br style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><span style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline">You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to</span><br style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none"><span style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline">the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List (</span><a href="mailto:ARIN-PPML@arin.net" style="color:rgb(5,99,193);text-decoration:underline;font-family:Helvetica;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px" target="_blank">ARIN-PPML@arin.net</a><span style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align: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