[arin-ppml] Revised - Draft Policy ARIN-2020-8: Clarify and Update 4.2.1.2 Annual Renewal Fee

[Joe Provo]

On Tue, Dec 15, 2020 at 02:42:45PM -0800, Owen DeLong wrote:
> [really big snips]
> 
> > 
> > In the interest of both simplification and striving to eliminate
> > the fee or contract details within policy, I'm a fan of Mr Woodfield's
> > suggestion for simple generalization. What do folks think about:
> > 
> > 2.X Registration Services Agreement (RSA)
> > 
> > Number resources allocated or assigned by ARIN under these policies are
> > subject to a contractural agreement between ARIN and the resource holder. 
> > Throughout this document, any and all forms of this agreement, past or
> > future, is simply referred to as the Registration Services Agreement 
> > (RSA).  This agreement covers terms, rights, responsibilities and
> > conditions of service; failure to adhere to the RSA may result in
> > revocation of number resources.
> > 
> > Cheers,
> > 
> > Joe
> 
> I like it, but I suggest ??????are simply referred to by the term Registration Services Agreement (RSA)??????
> 
> Alternatively, ??????each and every form of this agreement (past, present, and future), is referred to as??????
> 
> I would leave off the last sentence. It gets into spelling out what???s contained in the RSA which I believe is out of scope for the PDP.
> 
> To clarify, proposed alternate version:
> 
> 2.X Registration Services Agreement (RSA)
> Number resources allocated or assigned by ARIN under these policies are
> subject to a contractural agreement between ARIN and the resource holder. 
> Throughout this document, any and all forms of this agreement, past or
> future, are simply referred to as the Registration Services Agreement 
> (RSA).
 

SGTM but there was previous discussion indicating people didn't want 
to trim the references to consequences [see August thread and ARIN46
discussion].  Personally, I do not believe it belongs in the NRPM but
am amenable if the community thinks it does.

Hopefully this will trigger some more feedback from the community. :-)

Cheers!

Joe
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