[arin-ppml] Initial ISP Allocation Policy

[David Huberman]

Dan,

Thank you for moving this discussion to the next step by providing excellent draft policy proposal text (and providing a redlined PDF).  I support this draft text.  I have two comments for your consideration:

1) Since we're cleaning up NRPM, let's remove section "4.2.2 Annual Renewal".  This text does not help answer the question, "Do I qualify for number resources from ARIN?" and is already sufficiently covered by the RSA text.

2) The SWIP section (4.2.8.7.1 Reassignment Information): the way the new text is written, it seems to me that if $ENTERPRISE assigns a /28 to a $PURPOSE, that has to be SWIPed.  Would the text be improved if the opening sentence read, "Each IPv4 assignment to an external customer" or somesuch?

With regards,
David