[arin-ppml] Draft Policy ARIN-2013-3: Tiny IPv6 Allocations for ISPs

[David Farmer]

On 4/5/13 08:31 , William Herrin wrote:
> On Fri, Apr 5, 2013 at 8:23 AM, David Farmer <farmer at umn.edu> wrote:
>> g. An LIR that requests a smaller /36 or /40 allocation is entitled to
>> expand the allocation to /32 or /36 at any time without renumbering or
>> additional justification.
>
> Hi David,
>
> This could be misread to mean "/32 or /36 respectively" instead of
> "either /32 or /36 as the registrant chooses."

That's was bugging me too, but I wasn't sure how to fix it.  How about;

g. An LIR that requests a smaller /36 or /40 allocation is entitled to 
expand the allocation to either /32 or /36 at any time without 
renumbering or additional justification. ...

Does that cover it without getting to wordy?

>> e. All returned block(s) must not be in use by the organization or its
>> customers.
>
> This verbiage is a little clumsy. I'm not sure how to word it better.

How about;

e. All block(s) returned must not be in use by the organization or its 
customers.

Not a big change but it read a little better.


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