[arin-ppml] Version 1.1 (grammatical cleanup and clarification) of Proposal 158 (Clarify Multiple Discrete Networks IPv4 Policy)

[Martin Hannigan]

On Fri, Nov 11, 2011 at 8:27 PM, Matthew Petach <mpetach at netflight.com> wrote:

>> 4.5.5 [..] the organization may alternatively qualify for additional internet address registrations by having all unallocated blocks of addresses smaller than ARIN's current minimum allocation size.
>
> I'm sorry, but "the organization may alternatively qualify for
> additional internet
> address registrations by having all unallocated blocks of addresses smaller
> than ARIN's current minimum allocation size." seems to be a sentence fragment,
> and doesn't parse into meaningful English.
>
> Could that section be rewritten in a way that makes sense?  I have
> no idea what it is trying to say.  :(

Noted, and if this goes forward I'll make sure that it's addressed.

Best,

Martin Hannigan
ARIN Advisory Council Member