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<div>See below for information on the 2nd Draft of the CRISP team's response to the ICG's RFP<br>
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<div><b>From:</b> Craig Ng <<a href="mailto:craig@apnic.net">craig@apnic.net</a>><br>
<b>Date:</b> January 8, 2015 at 3:17:24 PM PST<br>
<b>To:</b> "<a href="mailto:ianaxfer@apnic.net">ianaxfer@apnic.net</a>" <<a href="mailto:ianaxfer@apnic.net">ianaxfer@apnic.net</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> <b>[IANAxfer@apnic] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Final Call for Comments</b><br>
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<div><span>In the past few hours, the CRISP team has released the second draft of the</span><br>
<span>Internet numbers community's response to the Request For Proposals issued</span><br>
<span>by the IANA Stewardship Coordination Group (ICG). The draft document can</span><br>
<span>be accessed through the links in the email below.</span><br>
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<span>The CRISP team is now asking for final comments from the community, before</span><br>
<span>12 January 2015 23:59 UTC.</span><br>
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<span>More details below.</span><br>
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<span>Regards</span><br>
<span>Craig</span><br>
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<span>On 9/01/2015 3:21 am, "Izumi Okutani" <<a href="mailto:izumi@nic.ad.jp">izumi@nic.ad.jp</a>> wrote:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Dear colleagues,</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Coordination Group (ICG).</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Proposal (CRISP) Team, with considerations of feedback received from the</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>global community on <<a href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a>> mailing list.</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>We have incorporated the following key points in the second draft:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>- Additional description on contract details, review committee and</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  intellectual property rights</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>- Description revised on Section V. NITA Requirements and VI.</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  Community Process for more clarity</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>- No changes are made to key elements of the proposal</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span><<a href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a>> mailing list before the deadline of 5th Jan 2015, and</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>would now like to make the final call for comments from the global</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>community on the draft proposal, before submitting to the ICG.</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Second Draft proposal:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Clean Version  :</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span><<a href="http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft">http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft</a>></span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Redline Version:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span><http:/<a href="http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control">www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control</a>></span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>The deadline for providing feedback: Mon, 12 January 2015 23:59 UTC</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Feedback should be sent to         : <<a href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a>> mailing list</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>proposed the CRISP Team positions at:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span> <<a href="http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015">http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015</a>></span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Key dates:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span> Second draft to be published        :  8 Jan 2015</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span> Second draft comments close        : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span> Final proposal to be sent to ICG : 15 Jan 2015</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>How to Engage in Discussions:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>All global discussions, for the CRISP team to consider as community</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>feedback, will be conducted at <<a href="mailto:ianaxfer@nro.net">ianaxfer@nro.net</a>> mailing list.</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>All the CRISP Team discussions are open to observers.</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Next Step:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>In developing the final draft based on further feedback, the CRISP</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Team will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>issues raised by the global community, which are compiled in the</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>published issues list. The proposal will only incorporate issues that</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>community.</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>References:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>* Discussions by the CRISP Team</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  available at:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  <a href="https://nro.net/crisp-team">https://nro.net/crisp-team</a></span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>* Other links:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>- The ICG request for proposals:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span> <<a href="https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en">https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en</a>></span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>- The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  <<a href="http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement">http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement</a>></span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>- First Draft proposal (Edited version)</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  <<a href="http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1">http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1</a>></span><br>
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