<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">“The experiment’s outcomes must also be published in a publicly accessible policy”—<div class="">I don’t think policy is the correct final word to this sentence… Many experiments (most I would venture to say) don’t result in policies.</div><div class="">Perhaps document, report, or some other word would be more appropriate here?</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">"Demonstration to ARIN that the experimental activity is technically coordinated in that consideration of any potential negative impact of the proposed experiment on the operation of the Internet and its deployed services has been considered, and a description of experimenter mitigation plans to contain any negative impacts has been provided.” —</div><div class="">I think “adequately coordinated”, “properly coordinated”, or simply “coordinated” would be better choices of wording here.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I think 11.4 can be further simplified… suggest:</div><div class="">The number Resources are allocated for the duration of the experiment, not to exceed one year. An extension may be granted at staff discretion upon application to ARIN documenting the need for more time to complete a successful experiment.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Owen</div><div class=""><br class=""><div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Sep 19, 2022, at 13:49 , ARIN <<a href="mailto:info@arin.net" class="">info@arin.net</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><meta charset="UTF-8" class=""><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;"><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">The following Draft Policy has been revised:</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">* ARIN-2022-8: Streamlining Section 11 Policy Language</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Revised text is below and can be found at:</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><a href="https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2022_8/" class="">https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2022_8/</a></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">You are encouraged to discuss all Draft Policies on PPML. The AC will evaluate the discussion to assess the conformance of this Draft Policy with ARIN's Principles of Internet number resource policy as stated in the Policy Development Process (PDP). Specifically, these principles are:</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">* Enabling Fair and Impartial Number Resource Administration</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">* Technically Sound</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">* Supported by the Community</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">The PDP can be found at:</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><a href="https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/" class="">https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/</a></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Draft Policies and Proposals under discussion can be found at:</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><a href="https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/" class="">https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/</a></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Regards,</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Sean Hopkins</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Senior Policy Analyst</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Draft Policy ARIN-2022-8: Streamlining Section 11 Policy Language</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Problem Statement:</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Section 11 of the NRPM contains a great deal of language that is either explicitly not policy, or is not impactful on ARIN's administration of Internet number resources for experimental allocations, or to the customers requesting said resources. A revision to transform Section 11 into a collection of policies for experimental allocations serves to make the Section more easily digested by the reader, and a more functional reference for customers and ARIN staff during experimental allocation requests.</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Policy statement:</div><div style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div class="">Section 11 Overview</div><div class="">Current text:</div><div class="">11. Experimental Internet Resource Allocations</div><div class="">ARIN will allocate Numbering Resources to entities requiring temporary Numbering Resources for a fixed period of time under the terms of recognized experimental activity.</div><div class="">"Numbering Resources" refers to unicast IPv4 or IPv6 address space and Autonomous System numbers.<br class="">The following are the criteria for this policy:</div><div class="">Proposed text:</div><div class="">11. Experimental Internet Resource Allocations</div><div class="">ARIN will allocate Number Resources to organizations requiring temporary Number Resources for a fixed period of time under the terms of a recognized experimental activity.</div><div class="">Section 11.1</div><div class="">Current text:</div><div class="">11.1. Documentation of Recognized Experimental Activity</div><div class="">A Recognized Experimental Activity is one where the experiment's objectives and practices are described in a publicly accessible document. It is a normal requirement that a Recognized Experimental Activity also includes the undertaking that the experiment's outcomes be published in a publicly accessible document at the end of the experiment. The conditions for determining the end of the experiment are to be included in the document. Applicants for an experimental allocation are expected to demonstrate an understanding that when the experiment ends, the allocation will be returned; a successful experiment may need a new allocation under normal policies in order to continue in production or commercial use, but will not retain the experimental allocation.</div><div class="">A "publicly accessible document" is a document that is publicly and openly available free of charges and free of any constraints of disclosure.</div><div class="">ARIN will not recognize an experimental activity under this policy if the entire research experiment cannot be publicly disclosed.</div><div class="">ARIN has a strong preference for the recognition of experimental activity documentation in the form of a document which has been approved for publication by the IESG or by a similar mechanism as implemented by the IETF.</div><div class="">Proposed text:</div><div class="">11.1. Eligibility Criteria for Recognized Experimental Activity</div><div class="">The eligibility criteria for a recognized experimental activity under this policy are:</div><ul type="disc" style="margin-bottom: 0in;" class=""><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The experiment’s description and objectives are published in a publicly accessible document, which for the purpose of this policy means that the document is readily available free of charges to the public, and free of any constraints of disclosure within one year after the end of the experiment;<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The experiment’s outcomes must also be published in a publicly accessible policy;<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Demonstration to ARIN that the experimental activity is technically sound within the meaning of ARIN’s Policy Development Process;<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Demonstration to ARIN that the experimental activity is technically coordinated in that consideration of any potential negative impact of the proposed experiment on the operation of the Internet and its deployed services has been considered, and a description of experimenter mitigation plans to contain any negative impacts has been provided.<o:p class=""></o:p></li></ul><div class="">Retire Sections 11.2 and 11.3</div><div class="">Section 11.4</div><div class="">Current text:</div><div class="">11.4. Resource Allocation Term and Renewal</div><div class="">The Numbering Resources are allocated for a period of one year. The allocation can be renewed on application to ARIN providing information as per Detail One. The identity and details of the applicant and the allocated Numbering Resources will be published under the conditions of ARIN's normal publication policy. At the end of the experiment, resources allocated under this policy will be returned to the available pool.</div><div class="">Proposed text:</div><div class="">11.4. Resource Allocation Term and Renewal</div><div class="">The Number Resources are allocated for a period of one year under this policy. The allocation can be renewed on application to ARIN by providing information as to why an extension is necessary for a successful experiment. The resources allocated under this policy must be returned to ARIN as soon as the recognized experimental activity has ended.</div><div class="">Section 11.5</div><div class="">Current text:</div><div class="">11.5. Single Resource Allocation per Experiment</div><div class="">ARIN will make one-off allocations only, on an annual basis to any applicant. Additional allocations to an organization already holding experimental activity resources relating to the specified activity outside the annual cycle will not be made unless justified by a subsequent complete application.</div><div class="">It's important for the requesting organization to ensure they have sufficient resources requested as part of their initial application for the proposed experimental use.</div><div class="">Proposed text:</div><div class="">11.5. Single Resource Allocation per Recognized Experimental Activity</div><div class="">ARIN will make only one allocation per recognized experimental activity. An allocation may consist of multiple Number Resources if required for the conduct of the recognized experimental activity. Additional allocations to an organization already holding experimental Number Resources will not be made under this policy unless justified by a subsequent complete application relating to a different experimental activity.</div><div class="">Retire Section 11.6</div><div class="">Section 11.7</div><div class="">Current text:</div><div class="">11.7. Resource Allocation Guidelines</div><div class="">The Numbering Resources requested come from the global Internet Resource space, do not overlap currently assigned space, and are not from private or other non-routable Internet Resource space. The allocation size shall be consistent with the existing ARIN minimum allocation sizes, unless smaller allocations are intended to be explicitly part of the experiment. If an organization requires more resources than stipulated by the minimum allocation size in force at the time of its request, the request must clearly describe and justify why a larger allocation is required. All research allocations must be registered publicly in whois. Each research allocation will be designated as a research allocation with a comment indicating when the allocation will end.</div><div class="">Proposed text:</div><div class="">11.7. Resource Allocation Guidelines</div><div class="">The Number Resources requested shall come from the global Number Resource space, shall not overlap any currently assigned space, and shall not be from private or other non-routable Number Resource space. The allocation size shall be consistent with the existing ARIN minimum allocation sizes, unless smaller allocations are explicitly required due to the nature of the experiment. If an organization requires more resources than stipulated by the minimum allocation size in force at the time of its request, the request must clearly describe and justify why a larger allocation is required. All research allocations must be registered publicly in ARIN’s directory services. Each research allocation will be designated as a research allocation with a comment indicating when the allocation will end.</div><div class="">Section 11.8</div><div class="">Current text:</div><div class="">11.8. Commercial Use Prohibited</div><div class="">If there is any evidence that the temporary resource is being used for commercial purposes, or is being used for any activities not documented in the original experiment description provided to ARIN, ARIN reserves the right to immediately withdraw the resource and reassign it to the free pool.</div><div class="">Proposed text:</div><div class="">11.8. 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