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Owen, for clarity:</div>
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<span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri, sans-serif;margin:0in">[the] Advisory Council (AC) accepted "ARIN-prop-310: Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.1 and 2.2" as a Draft Policy.</span></div>
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This was not accepted as an Editorial policy, and will therefore undergo all the normal community review and</div>
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steps toward recommended draft, etc.</div>
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The policy name would have been changed to ARIN-edit-xxxx had it been brought on otherwise, as you can see by 22-[6,7]</div>
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [arin-ppml] Draft Policy ARIN-2022-4: Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.1 and 2.2</font>
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Since this expands the actual scope of 2.1 and 2.2, it is not editorial IMHO.
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<div class="">It likely applies the intended scope and may even be the currently practiced scope, but does not reflect the previously documented scope.</div>
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<div class="">On Jul 26, 2022, at 14:34, ARIN <<a href="mailto:info@arin.net" class="">info@arin.net</a>> wrote:</div>
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On 21 July 2022, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) accepted "ARIN-prop-310: Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.1 and 2.2" as a Draft Policy.</div>
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Draft Policy ARIN-2022-4 is below and can be found at:</div>
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You are encouraged to discuss all Draft Policies on PPML. The AC will evaluate the discussion to assess the conformance of this draft policy with ARIN's Principles of Internet number resource policy as stated in the Policy Development Process (PDP). Specifically,
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* Enabling Fair and Impartial Number Resource Administration</div>
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* Technically Sound</div>
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* Supported by the Community</div>
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The PDP can be found at:</div>
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Draft Policy ARIN-2022-4: Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.1 and 2.2</div>
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Problem Statement:</div>
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This proposal continues the work that the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up Working Group undertook to conduct an editorial review of the NRPM. It relates specifically to Sections 2.1 and 2.2. The focus of this proposal is to increase the consistency of terminology employed
in the NRPM.</div>
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Policy statement:</div>
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In Section 2.1, change the text “IP address space” to “Internet numbering resources”, and in Section 2.2, change the text “address space” to “numbering resources” to reflect all of the types of Internet numbering resources administered by the types of entities
defined in those sections.</div>
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Timetable for implementation: Immediate</div>
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Comments:</div>
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This proposal is intended to replace Prop-305 in part. Although the proposal was drafted in the course of an editorial review of Sections 2.1 and 2.2, some of the changes proposed may not be considered purely editorial in nature and so this proposal is not
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