<div dir="auto">+3 Bill’s edits below.</div><div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Thu, Jul 29, 2021 at 23:02 Mattapally Technologies <<a href="mailto:technologiesmattapally@gmail.com">technologiesmattapally@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><span style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-size:14px">+2 Bill’s suggested edits below</span><br><br>On Thursday, July 29, 2021, Brian Jones <<a href="mailto:bjones@vt.edu" target="_blank">bjones@vt.edu</a>> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">+1 Bill’s suggested edits below.<br>
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> On Jul 28, 2021, at 3:43 PM, William Herrin <<a href="mailto:bill@herrin.us" target="_blank">bill@herrin.us</a>> wrote:<br>
> <br>
> On Tue, Jul 27, 2021 at 9:56 AM ARIN <<a href="mailto:info@arin.net" target="_blank">info@arin.net</a>> wrote:<br>
>> In Section 8.3.:<br>
>> <br>
>> Under “Conditions on source of the transfer,†replace “Number resources received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for the purposes of this restriction†with “This restriction does not include 8.2 transfers.â€<br>
> <br>
> Howdy,<br>
> <br>
> They both seem about the same to me. The replacement is less clumsy<br>
> than the original but still clumsy. Just throwing out some<br>
> wordsmithing here:<br>
> <br>
> Current;<br>
> <br>
> The source entity must not have received a transfer, allocation, or<br>
> assignment of IPv4 number resources from ARIN for the 12 months prior<br>
> to the approval of a transfer request. Number resources received as<br>
> the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for the purposes of<br>
> this restriction.<br>
> <br>
> Suggested:<br>
> <br>
> Excluding section 8.2 transfers, the source entity must not have<br>
> received a transfer, allocation, or assignment of IPv4 number<br>
> resources from ARIN during the 12 months prior to the approval of a<br>
> transfer request.<br>
> <br>
> That seems to me to flow better.<br>
> <br>
> Regards,<br>
> Bill Herrin<br>
> <br>
> <br>
> --<br>
> William Herrin<br>
> <a href="mailto:bill@herrin.us" target="_blank">bill@herrin.us</a><br>
> <a href="https://bill.herrin.us/" target="_blank">https://bill.herrin.us/</a><br>
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