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<p>The first sentence of section 3.6.4 redundantly says "annual"
twice.<br>
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"An annual email notification will be sent ... on an annual basis."
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Either the first "annual" or the last phrase ("on an annual
basis") should be struck. <br>
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Otherwise, this is better. The original wording didn't actually
say that if the POC was reachable, but there were mistakes in the
contact information, the mistakes could and should be corrected!
The only options for a POC were to confirm the POC information as
correct and complete, or to be non-responsive. I know from
experience that if there were were errors in the POC information,
ARIN would correct it, but the policy as is doesn't actually say
so. I just fought (and lost) this battle with one of the credit
reporting agencies which had completely garbled the name of my
current employer. I would be astounded if ARIN wasn't more
competent! :-)<br>
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On 11/14/2017 11:05 AM, Potter, Amy wrote:<br>
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annual email notification will be sent to each of the Points
of Contact outlined in section 3.6.2 on an annual basis. Each
Point of Contact will have up to sixty (60) days from the date
of the notification in which to respond with an affirmative
that their Whois contact information is correct and complete
or to submit new data to correct and complete it. If after
careful analysis, ARIN staff deems a POC to be completely and
permanently abandoned or otherwise illegitimate, the POC
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John Santos
Evans Griffiths & Hart, Inc.
781-861-0670 ext 539
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