[arin-ppml] Revised - Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2022-10: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.4 and 2.5

[Owen DeLong]

I support this as an editorial change.

Owen


> On Oct 26, 2022, at 10:43 , ARIN <info at arin.net> wrote:
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> On 21 October 2022, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) submitted "ARIN-edit-2022-10: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.4 and 2.5" to a new community review period with corrected text to reflect the August revision.
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> The text is below and can be found at:
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> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2022_10/ <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2022_10/>
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> The process for Editorial Changes is found in Part One, Section 3.1, paragraph 3 of the Policy Development Process (PDP):
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> "Changes to policy that are purely editorial and non-substantial in nature are outside the scope of the full Policy Development Process and may only be made with 30 days public notice followed by the concurrence of both the ARIN Advisory Council and ARIN Board of Trustees that the changes are non-substantial in nature."
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> Your feedback on this Editorial Change is encouraged. The review period will close on 26 November 2022, considering the Thanksgiving holiday.
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> The Number Resource Policy Manual is available at:
> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/nrpm/ <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/nrpm/>
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> The PDP is available at:
> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/ <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/>
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> Regards,
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> Sean Hopkins
> Senior Policy Analyst
> American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)
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> Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2022-10: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Sections 2.4 and 2.5 
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> Problem Statement:
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> This proposal continues the work that the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up Working Group undertook to conduct an editorial review of the NRPM. It relates specifically to Sections 2.4 and 2.5. The focus of this proposal is to increase the consistency of terminology employed in the NRPM and ensure that the intended meaning of the text is clear.
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> Policy Statement:
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> In Section 2.4, change the text “address space” to “IP addresses”, and remove the comma after the text “(ISPs)”, and in Section 2.5, change the text “Address space” to “IP addresses” in each of the first four paragraphs and change the text “address space” to “IP addresses” in the last paragraph.
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> Timetable for Implementation: Immediate
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> Comments:
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> This proposal is intended to be editorial in nature and to replace Prop-305 in part.
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