[arin-ppml] Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Section 4 and Related Provisions

[Martin Hannigan]

Did you mean to say that there was a markup "red line" showing the changes?
If there is, I don't see it or anything that lets someone easily ascertain
what's being proposed change wise.



On Tue, Mar 23, 2021 at 11:11 AM ARIN <info at arin.net> wrote:

> On 18 March 2021, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) classified "ARIN-2020-9:
> Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Section 4 and Related Provisions" as an
> Editorial Change to the Number Resource Policy Manual (NRPM).
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> The text is below and can be found at:
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> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/
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> The process for Editorial Changes is found in Part One, Section 3.1,
> paragraph 3 of the Policy Development Process (PDP):
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> "Changes to policy that are purely editorial and non-substantial in nature
> are outside the scope of the full Policy Development Process and may only
> be made with 30 days public notice followed by the concurrence of both the
> ARIN Advisory Council and ARIN Board of Trustees that the changes are
> non-substantial in nature."
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> Your feedback on this Editorial Change is encouraged. The review period
> will close on 22 April 2021.
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> The Number Resource Policy Manual is available at:
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> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/nrpm/
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> The PDP is available at:
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> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/
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> Regards,
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> Sean Hopkins
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> Senior Policy Analyst
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> American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)
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> Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Section 4
> and Related Provisions
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> Problem Statement:
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> ARIN staff have identified some areas of potential editorial clean-up of
> section 4 of the NRPM. Building on those recommendations the ARIN AC NRPM
> Clean-up Working Group undertook an editorial review of section 4.
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> The focus of the review was to clarify and simplify language, employ
> consistent and more up to date terminology throughout and renumber the
> sections after removing section numbers that were no longer being utilized.
> In the course of this work, we discovered the need for certain changes to
> sections 2, 3, and 6. We included those that are editorial in nature in
> this proposal.
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> Other changes to those three sections will be addressed in subsequent
> proposals. We are also proposing that the NRPM Table of Contents be updated
> to reflect the editorial changes to the NRPM contents contained in this
> proposal.
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> Policy Statement:
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> The changes proposed to be made in this editorial proposal are too
> numerous to list individually. Accordingly, a document is provided at
> http://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/pdf/arin_edit_2020_9_v2.pdf
> that shows the changes being proposed as mark-up text relative to the
> version of the NRPM in effect when the editorial work of the Working Group
> started.
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> Timetable for Implementation: Immediate
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> Anything Else:
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> This proposal is intended to be editorial in nature.
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