[arin-ppml] Revised - Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8 Editorial Clean-up

Chris Woodfield chris at semihuman.com
Thu Aug 19 13:22:52 EDT 2021


Support. New language is far more efficient and readable.

Thanks,

-C

> On Aug 18, 2021, at 1:59 PM, ARIN <info at arin.net> wrote:
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> The following Editorial Change has been revised:
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> * ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8 Editorial Clean-up
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> Revised text is below and can be found at:
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> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/ <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/>
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> The process for Editorial Changes is found in Part One, Section 3.1, paragraph 3 of the Policy Development Process (PDP):
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> "Changes to policy that are purely editorial and non-substantial in nature are outside the scope of the full Policy Development Process and may only be made with 30 days public notice followed by the concurrence of both the ARIN Advisory Council and ARIN Board of Trustees that the changes are non-substantial in nature."
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> Your feedback on this Editorial Change is encouraged as the community review period continues. This review period will close on 26 August 2021. 
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> The PDP can be found at: 
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> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/ <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/>
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> Draft Policies and Proposals under discussion can be found at: 
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> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/>
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> Regards,
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> Sean Hopkins
> Senior Policy Analyst
> American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)
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> Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Section 8 Editorial Clean-up
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> Problem Statement:
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> ARIN staff have identified some areas of potential NRPM editorial clean-up. Building on those recommendations the ARIN AC NRPM Clean-up Working Group undertook an editorial review of the NRPM.
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> The focus of the review was to clarify and simplify language, employ consistent and more up to date terminology throughout and renumber the sections after removing section numbers that were no longer being utilized. The changes resulting from this review were captured in ARIN-edit-2020-9, proposed in September 2020.
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> The portions of ARIN-edit-2020-9 relating to Sections 8.3 and 8.4 of the NRPM are presented in this editorial change for community consideration. The remaining portions will be presented separately.
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> Policy Statement:
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> In Section 8.3.:
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> Under "Conditions on source of the transfer," replace "The source entity must not have received a transfer, allocation, or assignment of IPv4 number resources from ARIN for the 12 months prior to the approval of a transfer request. Number resources received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for the purposes of this restriction." with "Excluding section 8.2 transfers, the source entity must not have received a transfer, allocation, or assignment of IPv4 number resources from ARIN during the 12 months prior to the approval of a transfer request."
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> In Section 8.4.:
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> Under "Conditions on source of the transfer," replace "Number resources received as the result of an 8.2 transfer are out of scope for the purposes of this restriction" with "This restriction does not include 8.2 transfers." 
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> Timetable for Implementation: Immediate
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