<html><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">I would delete the second occurrence of the word "of" from<div>the sentence such that it would read:</div><div><br></div><div>"Distribution of derivative data is only permitted with express</div><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style=""><font class="Apple-style-span" size="3" style=""><span class="Apple-style-span" style="text-decoration: line-through;font-size: 12px; ">of</span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: 12px; "> permission of ARIN and under the same terms as this AUP."</span></font></span></div><div><br></div><div><span class="Apple-style-span" style=""><font class="Apple-style-span" size="3" style=""><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: 12px; "></span></font></span>I would also suggest considering "... with the express permission..."</div><div>(add the word the).</div><div><br></div><div>Otherwise, I think this is an excellent idea.</div><div><br></div><div>Owen</div><div><br><div><div>On Jul 27, 2009, at 1:21 PM, Member Services wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div>ARIN is seeking community input regarding changes to the Acceptable Use<br>Policy ("AUP") for bulk copies of ARIN WHOIS data as found on the Bulk<br>WHOIS Request Form, available at<br><a href="https://www.arin.net/resources/agreements/bulkwhois.pdf">https://www.arin.net/resources/agreements/bulkwhois.pdf</a><br><br>Presently, ARIN specifically prohibits redistribution of bulk WHOIS<br>data. ARIN has recently determined that under some circumstances, it may<br>be beneficial for one organization that has received bulk WHOIS data to<br>provide it, subject to ARIN's express written permission, to another<br>person/organization for conducting Internet operations or technical<br>research. ARIN would maintain oversight on the usage of the data and<br>require adherence to the Bulk WHOIS AUP, which the recipient<br>organization must also sign.<br><br>As a result, ARIN is suggesting the following addition to the AUP:<br><br>"Distribution of derivative data is only permitted with express written<br>of permission of ARIN and under the same terms as this AUP.”<br><br>This change would allow redistribution when the use of the data is<br>consistent with the AUP. The AUP with suggested text highlighted, can be<br>found here:<br>https://www.arin.net/resources/agreements/bulkwhois_proposed.pdf<br><br>ARIN is seeking comments regarding this proposed change through the ARIN<br>Consultation and Suggestion Process, available at:<br>https://www.arin.net/participate/acsp/index.html<br><br>Discussion on this list will close at noon EDT, 14 August 09.<br><br>We welcome community-wide participation. Please address any process<br>questions to info@arin.net.<br><br>Regards,<br><br>Member Services<br>American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)<br><br><br>_______________________________________________<br>ARIN-Consult<br>You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to the ARIN Consult Mailing<br>List (ARIN-consult@arin.net).<br>Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at:<br>http://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-consult Please contact the ARIN Member Services<br>Help Desk at info@arin.net if you experience any issues.<br></div></blockquote></div><br></div></body></html>